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Aaron- Double Feature Press's avatar

Thanks for sharing . I thought the greats died at thirty, has that changed as well. Damn progress. Keep the words flowing.

Shain Parwiz's avatar

Hey Aaron, thank you for taking the time to read it, I wanted to join the 27 club; Hendrix, Morrison, Joplin , Cobain … etc. Please stick around, there’s definitely more coming. -Shain

Michelle Elise Taffe's avatar

Great Shain. I relate on many counts. Especially the missing the partner and kids part! Thanks for sharing and thanks also for recommending my posts sometimes. Big appreciation!

Shain Parwiz's avatar

Thank you for taking the time to read it Michelle. This current collection has more pieces, I’ll be posting it once I’m a little bit more settled. -Shain

Robin McIntire's avatar

Writing from the mirror is brave and your truths help others find theirs. Thank you for sharing.

Michèle Breton's avatar

For a memoir type piece, this is brilliantly honest! I think it's great! Keep going, your words are therapeutic! ✨

Shain Parwiz's avatar

Hi Michéle, i really appreciate you reading and commenting. It’s a rough road but I’m taking it a day at a time. Thanks again -Shain

Ketidiah's avatar

Beautiful art. Beautiful words. Thank you for sharing both.

Shain Parwiz's avatar

Hey Ketidiah, such kind words. I’m humbled. Thank you so much. Stick around please. -Shain

@robopulp's avatar

This is powerful stuff and that image is so striking!

Shain Parwiz's avatar

@@robopulp thanks so much. I truly am grateful for the kind words. -Shain

@robopulp's avatar

You're welcome my friend. Keep working on your craft. You have something special.

DD🌻's avatar

Indeed. Thanks for that. Dying young is so bloody over-rated. You have lived to tell the tale, and I appreciate it... you, Shain.

Keep going, there is so much depth still to explore!

Shain Parwiz's avatar

Yup the internal work is way tougher than the external ones. I’m trying to figure out how I can balance both. Life doesn’t really give us a roadmap, so I’m trying to figure out my own. Appreciate your comment and the time you spent on reading the piece.-Shain