Molting: A Profile in Echoes
When grief becomes gospel, who controls the scripture?
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Scene 7: The Gallery of Echoes
“The scariest thing about losing yourself… is realizing how long you’ve already been gone.”
— Anonymous (SSA Derek Morgan)
Previously on Molting…
A man in Singapore disappears, but his digital trail is anything but silent.
“I am not missing,” he insists in voice memos and Substack posts.
A framed photo, poetic clues, and a spine X-ray hint at something ritualistic.
Then, a whisper:
“Don’t follow me this time.”
INT. TEMPORARY BAU FIELD OFFICE – CONTINUOUS FROM SCENE 6
The looping voice memo crackles through the speakers:
Shain’s Voice (distorted, looping):
"Don’t follow me this time... don’t follow me this time..."
Garcia (panicked):
“Guys... it keeps looping. I can’t override it. Something—this isn’t from our servers!”
Morgan (into mic):
“Garcia? Talk to me—are you safe?”
Garcia (through static, distant):
“I’m okay—but this? It’s not just a voice file. It’s embedded code. He—or someone—piggybacked into our secure line.”
Rossi (under his breath):
“It’s a digital signature. Someone’s leaving a thumbprint.”
Hotch (firmly):
“Shut it down, Garcia. Wipe local playback and isolate the signal.”
Garcia:
“Copy that, sir. Going dark for a moment—full trace underway.”
The room exhales as the looping cuts. Silence.
EXT. ALIWAL STREET – 10:42 PM
Rain needles the windshield of the black SUV as the team arrives at the site: a small, underground art gallery tucked behind a row of cafés and boutique shops. The lights inside flicker—on purpose.
INT. GALLERY – CONTINUOUS
The gallery is bare.
Frames hang empty.
Pedestals cast long shadows.
A harsh spotlight beams down onto nothing—except the weight of what used to be.
Morgan (voiceover):
“Place like this... echoes louder than a crime scene. You don’t just see the absence—you feel it.”
The team enters slowly.
Hotch (eyes scanning the scene):
“No forced entry. Dismantled cleanly. No broken locks, no broken glass.”
Rossi (brushing a wall):
“Not vandalism. Precision. This was taken apart by someone who knew the space. Probably had keys.”
Reid (crouching):
“Footprints here—men’s size nine. Narrow gait. And the rotation inward... suggests someone with joint issues or scoliosis. This wasn’t done in a rush.”
Prentiss:
“Stage lights still running. Zones are highlighted... like cues for performance.”
Garcia (on-screen, static clears):
“Guys, found something. A ghost post. Timestamped 3:14 AM—captioned ‘Echo Installation.’ Uploaded from this gallery. It didn’t go public—it’s hidden. Deep-flagged with encrypted metadata.”
Hotch (nods):
“They wanted us to find it. But only after a delay.”
Rossi (looking at the walls):
“They’re not just hiding something. They’re curating absence.”
Morgan:
“‘The art will arrive in parts’? That’s not an exhibit. That’s a warning.”
Reid (flipping through his notebook):
“‘Molting’ appears in six of his posts. Also in that voice memo. In animals, it’s a survival tactic—shedding skin, feathers, exoskeletons. In trauma theory—it’s symbolic of transformation through loss.”
Prentiss (softly):
“He’s not just disappearing. He’s undergoing something.”
Garcia (displaying an image):
“Here’s the still from the ‘Echo Installation’ post. A pedestal—this pedestal—once held something. The image is too blurred to ID, but it’s... red. Possibly organic.”
Rossi:
“Then they removed it. Ritualistic placement—ritualistic removal.”
Reid (eyes brightening):
“They’re telling a story. One where the self is dismantled.”
Morgan:
“Question is—whose story is it? His? Or someone else’s?”
Prentiss:
“We’re meant to follow. Like it’s been choreographed.”
Hotch (focused):
“Then we track it step by step. Garcia, run a forensic pattern analysis on all Substack tags, GPS pings, IP trails. Anything out of sync.”
Garcia (determined):
“Running a recursive backtrace on poetic syntax paired with location data. Think of it as behavioral linguistics meets Google Earth.”
Morgan (studying pedestal):
“It’s not about what’s missing. It’s what’s been made to remain.”
Reid:
“Or... who’s been made to disappear.”
Hotch (final):
“This is no longer a missing persons case. This is the first act in something bigger.”
The spotlight hums.
The pedestal remains empty.
But its silence screams promise.
END SCENE.
Scene 8: The First Delivery
INT. PUNGGOL SATELLITE BLOOD DONATION CENTRE – 11:17 AM
Bright daylight floods a clean, well-populated centre. Donors recline in chairs, medical staff go about routine checks. The BAU team enters with DI Amir weaving through. Their presence, a sharp contrast to the calm morning.
DI AMIR (low):
“He used to volunteer here nearly every week. Then—nothing for six weeks.”
Hotch keeps his gaze steady, scanning donors and staff.
GARCIA (via tablet, calm):
“Last ping at 10:32 this morning. Same device—VPN flagged near here.”
Reid leans in, palms pressed together.
REID (softly):
“Using multiple VPN endpoints would fracture any location history… unless he knows enough to control it.”
Morgan arches an eyebrow.
MORGAN:
“So, we’ve got a ghost doc.”
Prentiss notices staff checking donor logs.
PRENTISS:
“Let’s ask if anyone actually clocked him in in recent visits.”
DI Amir nods, pulls a staffer aside. Hotch circles Reid and Morgan quietly.
HOTCH (quiet):
“He’s testing boundaries. First the gallery. Now the donation centre.”
Morgan glances at Reid, then back at the staffer.
MORGAN:
“Reid, can you get a handle on how his VPN usage maps to our other dots?”
Reid crushes his notepad, already flipping in his head.
REID:
“On it.”
Scene 9: Assembling the Profile
INT. SPF BRIEFING ROOM – POLICE CANTONMENT COMPLEX – 9:15 PM
The room’s crisply lit. A large digital map of Singapore glows behind the BAU and SPF officers. Evidence boards and banks of laptops line folding tables. Tension hums in the air—but beneath it lies an electric sense of anticipation.
Hotch moves beside Rossi, surveying the group.
Hotch (low, steady):
“Okay. We’ve got Dr. Goh’s ping patterns. We’ve planted surveillance at Block 80. But we haven’t hit him with a profile yet—and that’s where we make our move.”
Rossi (nodding):
“We lead with behavior. We explain the why before we act.”
Preston begins pulling up slides.
Prentiss (confident):
“He knows the victim intimately. Knew him since childhood. He’s exploiting Shain’s psychological footprint. Motive is symbolic—ritual designed to shape narrative.”
Hotch (to Morgan):
“Begin describing the crime scenes.”
Morgan (leaning in):
“Gallery, Blood Centre, now Bedok South—the fake heart planted at his childhood void deck. None are random. Each tie back to Shain’s emotional geography—public but personal. Designed to echo.”
Hotch (quiet):
“Garcia?”
Garcia (on-screen):
“I’ve mapped every upload to ping locations. Every ‘molting’ reference lines up with one of our scenes. He’s creating a living, breathing sequence—ritualistic.”
Reid pushes his glasses up, practically bouncing with excitement.
Reid (fast-spoken, excited):
“So based on the IP-to-geolocation overlay, plus metadata timestamps, we can predict the next stage. We can expect—if he’s following the molting pattern mirroring certain insect stages—it should escalate in frequency and symbolism. Next site should be…”
He clicks through an animated map.
Reid:
“…Pasir Ris flat redux. Maybe installation involving family artifacts—something that challenges the mother directly. Possibly a letter. Or blood recall to the sofa scene.”
A few jaws drop. One SPF officer blinks.
SPF Officer (curious):
“Hang on—where did you learn biology from, kid?”
Rossi (deadpan):
“You are asking it wrong,it should be what did you teach biology.”
The room cracks a smile. Reid gives a sheepish grin.
Morgan (smiling):
“We appreciate your… academic insight, Dr. Reid.”
Reid (genuine grin):
“If it buys us time, I think I’ll gift a gift basket.”
Garcia slides up a slide titled: “SUBJECT PROFILE: DR. GOH YONG TECK”
Garcia (matter-of-fact):
“Late 50s, ex-GP stripped of license—found guilty of misusing expired blood. Since then, volunteer at Punggol Satellite Centre until recent absence. Extreme familiarity with medical environment, Shain’s bloodstream, and psychological profile.”
Rossi (taking over):
“Diagnosis: Fixated caretaker turned ceremonial manipulator. Narcissistic tendencies. Obsession with transformation and sacrifice. Intelligent, ritual-minded, dramatic.”
Hotch (final):
“He’s performing grief—turning mourning into a public art piece. We have probable cause for search and restraint at Block 80. Let’s move quietly.”
The room’s energy shifts—resolute, focused.
Preston (soft to Morgan):
“So he’s a predator or a curator?”
Morgan (soft chuckle):
“Maybe both.”
Hotch (authoritative):
“SPF surveillance on Dr. Goh’s van. BAU surveillance on site. Garcia, coordinate every trace. Reid—prep artifact predictions. We strike when he’s alone.”
Garcia (screen):
“Received. Rolling data sweeps now.”
Rossi (quietly to Reid):
“Thanks for the biology crash course.”
Reid (smiles):
“Happy to serve.”
Hotch nods—this is the moment. The next move awaits.
END SCENE
Scene 10: Death Multiplication
Location Block 80, Bedok North Ave 1 — 6:37 PM
Rain slicks the pavement as the BAU and SPF arrive at the void deck. Blue and white tape flutters in the breeze. A synthetic heart rests on a white towel—surrounded by a dense pool of blood. A paper note beside it reads:
"We don’t die. We multiply."
Prentiss (stooping to examine the note):
“Cryptic... and theatrical.”
Reid (analyzing the layout, already spiraling):
“The heart is symbolic. Central. Human. And the quote—it’s layered. Pop culture and revolutionary overtones. Kendrick Lamar, yes—but the use here suggests martyrdom.”
Morgan (eyes flicking up):
“That’s Kendrick. Trust me, kid—I know K.Dot.”
Reid:
“And I saw that poster on Shain’s wall. It wasn’t just music. It was mantra.”
SPF Officer (softly, to Rossi):
“Where’d you find this guy?”
Rossi (stone-faced):
“Left in a basket. Outside the steps of the FBI.”
A beat—tension cuts for just a moment.
Hotch (firm, stepping forward):
“Reid, JJ—go to Shain’s flat. Go over everything again. Look for any signs he may have staged this—or any indication of coercion.”
Reid:
“There was a phrase in his journal. ‘Next time, I become the poem.’ He was hinting at this…”
Hotch:
“Rossi, Prentiss—track down Dr. Goh. Reinterview any past patients. Garcia will get you his clinic logs. This isn’t just symbolic. It’s biographical.”
Garcia (on screen):
“Already compiling. Also… DNA confirmation. The blood’s Shain’s. But the heart is 3D-printed. Industrial-grade bio-polymer. Whoever made this had access.”
Morgan:
“That’s not an unsub. That’s a precision artist with a medical playbook.”
Prentiss (to Rossi, quietly):
“And an audience.”
Hotch:
“Coordinate with SPF. Dr. Goh had means, motive, and history. But we don’t know if he’s the author... or just the archivist.”
Reid (softly):
“Either way, this chapter was for us.”
The camera lingers on the heart. Too lifelike to be fake. Too quiet to be real.
END SCENE
Scene 11: Crisis & Confrontation
Police Cantonment Complex – SPF Briefing Room, 8:45 PM
The BAU and SPF are gathered, tension electric.
HOTCH (steady, commanding):
“Thank you all for coming. We’ve spent the day piecing together staged dumpsites, a DNA-confirmed blood trail, and symbolic placements across key points in the victim’s life. Now’s time for the formal profile.”
ROSSI (leaning in):
“Our unsub is male, late 50s, medically trained—most likely ex-GP or longtime blood volunteer. He’s calculated, ritualistic, intent on mythology—not murder.”
PRENTISS (points to the gallery photos & blood maps):
“He uses performance—empty gallery, synthetic organs, notes—to control the narrative. He’s ritualizing grief.”
MORGAN (locks eyes with Hotch):
“And the choice of locations—Pasir Ris flat, childhood homes—shows personal obsession. He’s more than a perpetrator. He’s an archivist of suffering.”
An SPF Officer shifts uncomfortably.
MORGAN (nodding at him):
“We searched records—only one man fits. Quiet, near retirement. Unlicensed doctor, Dr. Goh Yong Teck. Lost his license five years ago for malpractice—improper blood handling. Known to the victim’s family since Shain was seven and helped him after his father’s death.”
HOTCH:
“We believe Dr. Goh is our unsub.”
GARCIA (on screen, suddenly hushed):
“I also pulled digital logs—a ping on Goh’s burner phone near Block 80, Bedok North Ave 1, yesterday. That fits Shain’s childhood address.”
Team looks over; maps get marked.
Scene Shift: Separate Teams Deployed
HOTCH:
“Morgan and Rossi—go to Block 80. Reid and Prentiss, check Dr. Goh’s known haunts, including his last Red Cross ping in Punggol. Garcia, stay with SPF and dig into his digital life.”
The tension ratchets: Footsteps echo.
Scene Reunite – Two Hours Later, SPF Office
Teams reconvene. They’re tense, carrying reports. Reid is scribbling furiously.
ROSSI (to SPF):
“We respect your team so we will get to it. Here’s what we know…”
He lays out the profile: medical access, psychological obsession, ritual staging. Goh fits. SPF nods, excitement building.
PRENTISS:
“Even his symbolic staging—stripped galleries, body-part installations—makes sense for someone who sees grief as art.”
Reid bursts in:
“Wait—if Dr. Goh wants to perform grief… why fake organs? Why not real ones? And why synthetic here, then real blood there?”
Everyone stops. SPF officers exchange glances.
HOTCH (to Reid):
“Go on, Spence.”
REID (eyes bright, words quick):
“The difference between fake parts and real blood isn’t just symbolism—it’s separation of control and authenticity. The unsub—Dr. Goh—curates the false, but knows the power of the real. What if someone—else—feeds him the real component, directing the narrative?”
Morgan and Rossi exchange stunned looks.
ROSSI (slowly):
“So we could have a dyad—a director feeding a performer.”
MORGAN:
“A god and his prophet. Goh fills the stage… someone else writes the script.”
HOTCH:
“And that script just got darker.”
Sudden Off-Screen Chime – Garcia’s voice changes.
GARCIA (urgent, shaky):
“I just received a message on a burner—untraceable. It’s… it’s not blood or body part. It’s an image—and a video.”
She switches the feed. A still frame shows an SPF officer one team worked with earlier tonight, slumped in a dim alley, what looks like a gunshot wound. A note taped to his uniform reads:
“You ask why I kill? Think why I don’t kill everyone. Think of me as GOD.”
Panic courses through the room.
PRENTISS (in shock):
“That’s D/Inspector Chew. He was with us at Block 80.”
Murmurs spread.
ROSSI (quiet fury):
“He’s dead. And we just got gassed.”
MORGAN (eyes dark):
“He wanted us to see. He wants us afraid.I already hate this guy”
HOTCH (rises):
“Everyone split. Hot perimeter, take Reid to investigate the alley where the officer was killed. Morgan and Prentiss, secure Goh’s primary residences—no interference. Garcia—clip that feed, trace everything. Move.”
Reid pauses in doorway, voice low:
“Hotch… if someone else is scripting this, they’ll know we’re onto them. They’ll escalate.”
HOTCH (nods):
“Then we change the ending.”
Camera lingers on Reid’s face—hope, fear, determination. Then the team moves out. Sirens begin.
Scene 12: God’s Whisper, Guilt’s Shadow
Al-Taqwa Mosque: (Back Entrance) –, 6:18 PM
A soft dusk light filters through palm trees. The call to prayer has passed; the streets are still. Beanbags of prayer mats line the inside wall; outside, the back entrance to Al-Taqwa Mosque is humble—just weathered brick, a dim light flickering above.The air hums with reverence and restraint.
Morgan arrives first, jacket folded over his arm, eyes scanning calmly but sharply. Prentiss follows, cradling a file. Reid trails behind, nose buried in his notebook, lips moving slightly in thought. Rossi brings up the rear, always watchful. Hotch stands at the perimeter, quietly taking in the surroundings.
Waiting at the entrance are Mrs. Samsudin and Faheem, their posture guarded.
HOTCH (gentle):
“Thank you for coming. We chose here because... this is where he felt safest, yes?”
MRS. SAMSUDIN (softly):
“He would take this path every Friday. Always the back way—never liked the crowd. Even when he was little.”
She looks up at Morgan, a flicker of hope in her eyes.
MRS. SAMSUDIN:
“I trust the mosque. And I trust you.”
MORGAN (warmly, with weight):
“Then we’ll carry that. Until he’s safe.”
PRENTISS:
“We’re not here just for evidence. We’re here because your story matters in this too.”
Faheem holds up a folder and carefully passes it to Prentiss. Inside: a single page—Shain’s handwriting.
FAHEEM:
“This was left on our doorstep. White envelope. No address. Just one word: ‘Mum.’”
PRENTISS (reading aloud):
“‘Mum, you are my hero. I’m sorry I became the villain.’”
She exchanges a glance with Hotch.
REID (stepping in):
“That phrasing—it’s off. The word ‘villain,’ it doesn’t appear anywhere in Shain’s journals. This is dramatized. Crafted. A theological framing.”
He flips to a page in his notebook.
REID (faster now):
“Combined with the God references in the last drop, and this site? It’s a spiritual performance. The unsub isn’t just imitating Shain’s voice—he’s hijacking it.”
SPF OFFICER (to Rossi, glancing at Reid who’s mid-analysis):
“Does he always talk like that? I lost him halfway through page one.”
ROSSI (grinning softly):
“Every day. Welcome to our world—where coffee cools before Reid does.”
MRS. SAMSUDIN (quietly, gripping the letter):
“This... this isn’t him, I can’t explain it, I just do. This is like someone else’s show.”
ROSSI (gently):
“That’s what we believe too. But that clarity? It helps us get closer.”
Hotch steps slightly aside, earpiece crackling.
HOTCH:
“Garcia, talk to me.”
GARCIA (voice tight over comms):
“Got a signal bounce. An encrypted burner pinged between a devotional site and Changi General. Still triangulating, but guess what—it’s the same model as the burner used in the last video drop.”
REID:
“That confirms a pattern. Controlled signal bursts. Always between faith and trauma.”
PRENTISS:
“We need teams on both zones—now.”
MORGAN (into his comm):
“Coordinate with SPF. Set up soft perimeter. No sirens. We don’t spook him.”
HOTCH:
“We split. Rossi, JJ, and Reid—stay here, keep Mrs. Samsudin briefed. Prentiss and Morgan—you’re with me.”
FAHEEM (softly):
“You are going to find him... alive right ? ”
MORGAN (placing a hand on his shoulder):
“We’ll do everything we can.”
As the team scatters, Hotch lingers a moment.He thinks of Jack in this same nightmare.
HOTCH (to Mrs. Samsudin):
“We’re not just solving a case. We’re fighting for your son’s story to be told truthfully.”
MRS. SAMSUDIN (eyes steady):
“I don’t care about stories, I just want my son back please.”
Scene beat shift:
The team splits—Prentiss and Morgan peel off with SPF units; Reid begins pulling maps on his tablet while Rossi comforts the family. Garcia’s feed flickers on a nearby tablet—coordinate updates from above.
As the last light dims over the mosque, a drone whirs overhead—catching the glint of something below. Just barely out of frame.
FADE OUT.
Scene 13: Mosque Murmurs, Samsudin’s Silence
Al-Taqwa Mosque (Front Entrance) The Next Day – 6:54 PM
A golden haze spills across the sky. The mosque’s minaret casts a long shadow over the courtyard. Evening prayer has just ended. The crowd disperses in quiet reverence—except for one cluster by the front entrance.
Mrs. Samsudin and Faheem stand at the gate, tense but composed. Hotch, Morgan, Reid, Prentiss, and Rossi approach from opposite ends of the courtyard. The energy is still. Heavy.
MORGAN (softly, stepping forward):
“Mrs. Samsudin. Thank you for meeting us again. We didn’t want to intrude during prayer.”
MRS. SAMSUDIN (folding her shawl tighter):
“He never entered from the front. Always the back—said it was quieter. I came tonight because… something told me to.”
FAHEEM (holding an envelope):
“This was on our doorstep. Again. No return address. Just... ‘Mum.’”
Prentiss takes the envelope, careful. She opens it. Reid peers over her shoulder. The letter is handwritten, unmistakably Shain’s penmanship—but the voice? It’s fractured.
PRENTISS (reading aloud):
“‘Mum… I’m still returning missed calls. God won’t pick up.
Now I swallow prose instead of pills—because ink doesn’t numb; it remembers.’”
Silence falls. The words hang like smoke.
MRS. SAMSUDIN (quietly, hands trembling):
“That... that’s his writing. But that’s not how he writes.”
REID (softly):
“It’s stylized. Reflective of his earlier journals. But here… the metaphor is weaponized. Intentional disorientation.”
FAHEEM (angrily):
“Why would he say this to her? It sounds like... surrender. Why isn’t he fighting for her, for us”
MORGAN:
“No. This isn’t a goodbye. It’s a manipulation. The unsub’s using Shain’s own voice to amplify the trauma.”
ROSSI (nodding):
“They’re reconstructing him. Like a performance. First the gallery. Now this letter. It’s staged grief.”
GARICA (via comms, tone grim):
“I hate to add more to this twisted…… urgh,but something just hit my feed. An encrypted video, sixty seconds. Upload came from a tower near the mosque.”
HOTCH (stepping closer):
“Play it. Just audio for now.”
A crackling begins. Then: Shain’s voice, distorted. He’s crying. Desperate.
SHAIN (V.O.):
“Is it a sin to not feel God anymore?
Or is the sin pretending you still do?”
The audio ends in static.
REID (visibly disturbed):
“That line… it’s from his early poems. ‘Sleepwalk Sermons.’ But back then, it was inquiry. Here—it’s despair.”
PRENTISS:
“Someone is hollowing out his voice. Making him a puppet for their theology.”
MRS. SAMSUDIN (clutching the envelope):
“He would never want this. Even at his lowest, he came here… to heal. After he got sober, he held this place close.”
ROSSI (gently):
“Ma’am, your strength is what he held onto. We believe that.”
SPF OFFICER (approaching, holding his radio):
“We picked up heat signatures behind the east wall. Should we deploy?”
HOTCH:
“Hold perimeter. No breach. Not yet.”
FAHEEM (suddenly remembering):
“That’s where he used to sit. By the fountain.He’ll have his tea there.”
MORGAN:
“Rossi, Prentiss—you circle west. I’ll take Reid. Faheem, you stay here.”
SPF OFFICER (watching Reid scroll rapidly through data):
“How do you even keep up with that kid?”
ROSSI (smirking):
“Welcome to our world.”
Scene Beat Shift
The courtyard clears. The call to prayer echoes faintly behind. The team fans out.
Reid lingers a moment. He turns to Mrs. Samsudin.
REID (gently):
“He’s not gone. Just... buried under someone else’s language. We’ll find him.”
She nods, her eyes filled but unbroken.
Camera pans up to the golden crescent above the mosque, the flicker of a drone overhead, and the sound of pages rustling in the evening wind.
FADE TO BLACK
Scene 14 “Mural’s Code, Blood’s Chant”
Fernvale Link, Outside the Special Needs School , 7:02 PM
The evening is dusky-blue. The school gates are shut. Through them, child-painted murals peek like echoes of laughter. Paper windmills flutter in planters. The place hums with a gentle ache—this is where Shain once felt purpose.
The team stands just beyond the gates: Morgan, Prentiss, Reid, Rossi, and Faheem. Mrs. Samsudin sits on a low concrete bench near a mural that reads, “Every Child a Star.” A crime scene tech hands Morgan a plastic sleeve—inside is a folded, time-worn piece of paper.
MORGAN (examining it, voice soft):
“This was left here, in the donation box next to the mural. Same type of envelope. Addressed again to ‘Mum.’”
(He unfolds it.)
“It’s typed. But this—” (he points) “—this last line was added in pen. Handwriting matches the last letter.”
REID (taking a closer look):
“One one thousand, two one thousand, three one thousand... cut.”
(Beat.)
“It’s a rhythmic dissociation technique. A countdown ritual—tied to trance states, behavioral conditioning.”
FAHEEM (eyes widening):
“He said that. That morning. he... he was standing right there.”
(Points to a painted tree on the wall.)
“He told me, ‘I’m taking myself out.’ Then he started counting—just like that. I thought he meant... quitting something. But now—”
ROSSI (gently):
“Could’ve been a Freudian slip. But that rhythm? It’s not just metaphor. It’s operant programming.”
PRENTISS (stepping in):
“We’ve seen this before. Mr. Scratch used tailored trauma triggers—sound, scent, scripture fragments. Built to reroute memory, hijack instinct.”
REID (nodding rapidly):
“Yes. Hypnotic anchors embedded within trauma loops. Shain’s journals—they were full of scripture, ritual, refrains. The unsub didn’t just study them. He used them. This chant—it’s a control key.”
MRS. SAMSUDIN (voice tight, trembling):
“He loved this place. The kids. He’d come home smiling even on his worst days.Said it the best job he ever had.”
(She clutches the paper.)
“If someone turned that joy into a weapon...”
MORGAN (softly):
“Then we’re not just chasing grief. We’re hunting the person who rewrote what peace meant for him.”
A silent moment.
GARCIA (via comms, urgent):
“Team—I ran a metadata trace on that letter’s ink signature. Weirdly, it cross-pinged a burner IP that uploaded the GOD quote—‘You ask why I kill?’—same signal tree. Same encryption.”
HOTCH (joining via comms):
“It’s coordinated. Controlled. LIFE isn’t just a name. It’s a mask. And under it—whoever this is—they’re crafting faith as fear. Playing deity.”
REID (quietly, eyes distant):
“‘Think of me as GOD’—now becomes: ‘Call me LIFE.’ A power fantasy. Messianic delusion. But also—"
(He hesitates.)
“—a system. He grooms the prophet, but stays cloaked.”
ROSSI:
“Dr. Goh becomes the first believer. Shain the holy wound. The rest of us? The congregation he taunts.”
MORGAN (darkly):
“And if this was performance, this school... this spot... was the stage of joy he knew. And LIFE twisted it. Hotch, I want this son of a bitch.”
PRENTISS (stepping closer to Mrs. Samsudin):
“This isn’t over. But it’s clearer now. Your son didn’t walk away from the light. Someone dimmed it on purpose.”
MRS. SAMSUDIN (steadies her voice):
“Then light it back. Find him.”
REID (to Faheem, quietly):
“Did he ever say anything else? Before he walked out?”
FAHEEM (softly):
“He said... ‘Tell Mum, I’m going quiet.’ Then he touched that mural. The one with the hands.”
They all turn. Painted hands—children’s, in every shade—form a heart.
ROSSI (quiet, almost to himself):
“He left a trace. Even while vanishing.”
MORGAN (to Prentiss):
“We get Garcia to backtrace the school’s CCTV cloud, silent zones. Maybe even staff logs.”
GARCIA (already typing):
“Already on it my love. Found a timestamp glitch on the courtyard cam at 6:12 AM. Shain’s size, hoodie, one frame only. Someone deleted the rest.”
HOTCH:
“Preserve that. Cross with the burner IPs. We build the map forward.”
REID (softly, notebook open):
“He wrote once: My wounds are alphabets. My scars—a roadmap. Maybe he knew we’d follow.”
PRENTISS:
“And we will.”
Final Beat:
The camera lingers on the mural—the heart of painted hands. Wind tugs softly at the paper in Morgan’s hand. The chant echoes in Reid’s mind: “One one thousand, two one thousand…”
CUT TO BLACK.
Scene 15: “Name of the Father”
BAU Temporary Field Office – SPF Division HQ, Singapore- 9:15 PM
The temporary BAU space at SPF HQ hums with residual urgency. Pinboards are cluttered with photos, maps, and printouts. The whiteboard bears half-erased fragments: “Ritual. Blood. Cut. Life = ???”
Garcia is stationed at her laptop from Quantico, monitors glowing. Reid paces, fingers twitching near his temple. Rossi stands by a corkboard of childhood photos and shredded journal fragments. Morgan leans on a table beside Mrs. Samsudin and Faheem, who have joined the team quietly.
HOTCH (stepping in from the hallway, sharp):
“We’ve just received preliminary footage confirmation from the school. It’s Shain. He was there before sunrise.”
(He crosses to Garcia, live on the Screen.)
“What about the name?”
GARCIA (grimly):
“It’s everywhere. Blog posts. Scrambled metadata in burner uploads. Each signal carries a tag: Samsudin. As if someone’s planting it deliberately.”
REID (turning from the board):
“He hasn’t used that name in years. It vanished after his father died. It’s not just a surname—it’s a psychic landmine.”
(Beat.)
“If LIFE is weaponizing that name… it’s the trigger for everything.”
ROSSI (quietly):
“That cemetery isn’t just a burial site. It’s a finish line.”
(He turns to Faheem.)
“Did your brother ever talk about his name?”
FAHEEM (hesitant, voice cracking):
“He said he didn’t deserve it. Said it died with Dad. But lately… he’d been sketching it. Shain Parwiz Samsudin. Always crossing it out again.”
Mrs. Samsudin’s face tightens. She takes a folded school report from her purse—Shain’s primary school certificate.
MRS. SAMSUDIN (barely above a whisper):
“He used to beam when he saw it. Said it made him feel full. Then he stopped signing it altogether.”
REID (taking the paper, scanning):
“LIFE’s programming reversed that connection. He’s turned pride into guilt. And guilt into obedience.”
He pins the report on the board. Written in neat cursive: “Shain Parwiz Samsudin.”
MORGAN:
“It’s the final instruction. Get him to that name. At his father’s grave. Then snap the string.”
PRENTISS (to Hotch):
“And Dr. Goh? If he’s complicit, he knows this too. We need to confront him again—full pressure.”
GARCIA (interrupts, her eyes wide):
“You guys—there’s more. A draft blog post. Not yet published. Titled: ‘Echoes of Samsudin.’ And the ending line…”
(She swallows.)
“‘They’ll remember the metaphors—but forget the man.’”
The room stills.
REID (softly):
“He’s surrendering… on someone else’s terms.”
HOTCH (steely):
“Tomorrow, we go to the cemetery. First light. Full team. No more delays.”
(To Garcia.)
“Garcia, keep digging on LIFE. If there’s a pattern, a manifesto—we end it before he finishes the last act.”
Cut to:
WHITEBOARD CLOSE-UP:
Under the pinned name: “Samsudin = Final Key?”
FADE TO BLACK
Scene 16: “Doctor in the Shadows”
Sunshine Suites, Sengkang – 3:42 AM
The apartment complex is quiet. A light drizzle has just stopped. Steam rises off the pavement. SPF has the perimeter locked down. The BAU team, led by Hotch, approaches the dim-lit unit on the third floor.
INT. DR. GOH’S APARTMENT – LIVING ROOM
Neat. Too neat. Medical textbooks stacked with surgical precision. A faded Red Cross jacket hangs on a hook. Along one wall: disturbing juxtapositions—fragments of Shain’s poetry beside ritual diagrams. A corkboard holds overlapping index cards, some with the word "Samsudin" circled.
Dr. Goh sits stiffly on a recliner, arms loose, wrists showing faint scratch marks. His eyes are red-rimmed. He’s not resisting. Just waiting.
HOTCH (low, controlled):
“Dr. Goh. We know about the staged installations, the transfers, the letters. What we don’t know is why.”
GOH (softly):
“Because I thought I was giving him a story. And stories… heal.”
ROSSI (with edge):
“You handed him over to someone calling himself LIFE. That’s not healing. That’s indoctrination.”
GOH (bitter laugh):
“He was already unraveling. I only… gave it form.”
REID (pacing now, voice accelerating):
“No. What you gave him was structure. Symbolic constructs—ritualized frameworks. You turned grief into a grid system. Layered metaphors onto trauma. And that made him more susceptible.”
(He spins toward the wall, pointing at one of Shain’s poems.)
“This—‘I am not missing, I am vanishing’—that’s disassociation. You didn’t stop it. You named it.”
GOH (quiet):
“He was lost. I thought if I mapped it…”
REID (voice rising, unraveling):
“You mapped the abyss! You scripted the suffering. Mr. Scratch used audio triggers—phrases, scents, feedback loops. You used poetry, names, ritual markers. Instead of pulling him out, you dug the cave deeper.”
PRENTISS (calm, cutting in):
“Spence—”
REID (still going):
“You anchored him to his guilt—his father’s death, the freezing, the silence. And then LIFE handed you the rope. And you Doctor, you tied the knot!”
MORGAN (from the hallway, low):
“Reid. Breathe.”
HOTCH (stepping forward, steel):
“We’re not here to debate ethics. We’re here because a young man is about to be sacrificed—and we’re out of time.”
(Reid falls silent, breathing heavy.)
GOH (struggling with his words):
“I didn’t know it would go this far. At first, it was… just ideas. Stages. Journals. But then LIFE started sending instructions. Actual choreography. The blood. The site choices. The name.”
(He pulls out a sealed envelope.)
GOH (shaky):
“He said… ‘The name will end the story.’ That when Shain hears it at the right place, the ritual completes.”
ROSSI (grim):
“The name?”
GOH (taps the envelope):
“Samsudin. It was removed from his records, therapy logs. Even his journals. But on that tombstone…”
REID (soft, haunted):
“It breaks the loop. Or closes it. Like a key. The mind reboots when it hears its origin in the context of trauma.”
PRENTISS:
“Wait. You’re saying—this whole spiral’s been building to a name?”
REID:
“Not just a name. His name. His father's name. The part of himself he buried.”
HOTCH (to Goh):
“Where? Doctor we need the location now.”
GOH (defeated):
“Pusara Aman. The grave of his dad. The final scene. He’s going there, but he doesn’t know why.
GARCIA (over comms, urgent):
“I just got a ping. One burner—same one that posted the GOD quote—is now live near Pusara Aman. Brief burst. Audio trace.”
HOTCH:
“Play it.”
The room holds its breath. The audio plays. Distorted. Hollow.
SHAIN (voice, broken, whispering):
“You say I’m the offering. But God doesn’t want this. God doesn’t want you.”
Silence.
ROSSI (darkly):
“He's still in there. Shain’s fighting it.Come on kid, fight.”
HOTCH (cold precision):
“Gear up. We move now.”
MORGAN (over comms):
“I’ll take west gate and secondary path.”
PRENTISS:
“East flank.”
REID (voice softer now):
“He wrote: ‘My wounds are alphabets. My scars—a roadmap.’”
(He looks at the name again.)
REID:
“We’re about to read the last chapter.”
HOTCH:
“Then let’s turn the page.”
CUT TO BLACK.
Scene 17: “Crossing the Sanctum”
Location: Pusara Aman Cemetery – Pre‑Dawn, 5:15 AM
The fog clings to the graves. Dawn light is a muted haze. Hotch leads the team—Morgan, Prentiss, Reid, Rossi—through narrow paths of aged tombstones. All senses are heightened.
REID (quietly, voice taut):
“It’s gravitational—early morning mist obscures visuals, but also heightens auditory perception. Listeners rely on subtle cues… like an approaching footstep or rustling.”
MORGAN (under his breath to Rossi):
“Leave it to Spence to psycho‑analyze dawn.” Rossi offers a sardonic but affectionate smirk.
Prentiss (firm):
“Eyes sharp. Watch the reflections on stones—any out-of-place movement.”
They fan out. Rossi hangs back with covering angles. Hotch and Morgan move ahead. Reid lingers by two adjacent graves, looking at names.
Rossi (soft, sidling next to Reid):
“Spence, save the acoustical analysis for later—"
Reid (interrupting, earnest):
“But spatial mapping here is interesting—memory‑psychology ties smell of damp earth to past trauma. If LIFE is architecting a scene, he’d exploit that.”
Before Rossi can respond, Hotch's radio crackles.
Hotch (thru comms):
“Garcia—burner ping just lit up. South side, near double‑niche section. Coordinates inbound. All units converge.”
Morgan (snapping to):
“Move. Now.”
Beat 2: They reach the gravesite near the father’s tombstone.
Hotch kneels at the base. A small device beeps silently next to a fresh scrape in the grass. Metallic glint—an empty syringe casing, smeared red‑brown.
PRENTISS (carefully):
“He’s close. Syringe? Could be leftover injection site—sedative perhaps.”
REID (leaning closer, eyes flickering):
“Based on common sedative profiles, a mid‑dose of benzodiazepine would induce light amnesia, disorientation—ideal for scripted awakenings later.”
He snaps a photo with his phone.
ROSSI (quietly, to Reid):
“Reid… metadata later. Right now—get this logged and let’s keep moving.”
MORGAN (turning to Rossi):
“We need DNA on the drip trace. Could link LIFE or Goh.”
Beat 3: Hotch directs flank positions.
HOTCH:
“Morgan take south sector. Rossi flank east. Prentiss hold center. Reid, with me. We search the immediate perimeter in concentric sweep—quietly.”
They fan out slowly. Crickets hush. A distant crow cries. Tension tightens.
Beat 4: Reid breaks the silence
REID (speaking to no one in particular, fast):
“Blood-type matches Shain’s. But note how that syringe is on soil near his father’s grave—he’s rewriting filial narrative. Psycho‑spiritual reclaiming. If we examine pollen, we can date its placement to this early morning, linking it specifically to today’s pre‑dawn hours…”
Morgan and Prentiss glance. Rossi smirks.
MORGAN (quietly):
“Seriously,kid?”
ROSSI:
“He’s reading the grass, Derek.”
PRENTISS (smiling despite tension):
“Let them translate later.”
Beat 5: Garcia cuts in
GARCIA (over comms):
“New burner blog post. Title: The Offering. Photo attached—a close-up of the syringe on the grass, taken before dawn. Tagged ‘Pusara Aman.’ Time stamp: 5:02 AM. The same batch sent to Shain’s poetry zine earlier. I’ve traced the upload to that burner IP—same one that pinged here.”
HOTCH (grim):
“He got here first. He’s watching. He’s confident.”
Beat 6: Team regroups by father’s gravestone
They stand in a tense half‑circle. The syringe and casing evidence bagged. Dawn light brightens.
MORGAN (voice low, controlled):
“He’s staging a confrontation with Shain—and us. The syringe could incapacitate Shain enough to recite something. It’s ceremony.”
ROSSI (emotional edge):
“This is no longer just recovery—it’s showmanship. A final act. Whatever it is, we have to stop it.”
PRENTISS (resolute):
“We’re not spectators. We’re ending this.”
REID (quietly, ominous):
“And he’s escalating. The structural integrity of his control deteriorates under bright daylight.”
HOTCH (locks eyes with each of them):
“Take positions around the grave. No intervention until we know where Shain is. We move only at my signal.”
Beat 7: Remote tension, unseen presence
They spread out, scanning for movement. Shallow breathing, dawning shadows creep across stones.
HOTCH (softly into comms):
“Morgan—drone live feed ready? Rossi—K9 en route. Garcia, relay blog updates when available.”
GARCIA (voice crackling in reply):
“Affirmative sir, – ‘Offering’ post has comments… no traceable users. All ghost burners.”
REID (to Hotch):
“If Shain arrives… and gets triggered by the syringe, or by seeing his father’s stone. He’s been groomed for this moment.”
HOTCH (quiet strength):
“We’ll be ready.”
They wait. Silence amplifies every breath. A chapter poised to close with violence—or rescue.
Scene 18 – Breaking Samsudin
Pusara Aman Cemetery — Dawn, 7:00 AM
The cemetery is drenched in fragile dawn light. A soft mist drifts between weathered tombstones. The team fans out quietly around the small clearing before a grave marked “Samsudin.” The world feels suspended.
Hotch stands at the center, issuing low directives through a hand-held radio.
“Morgan, Prentiss—east flank. Keep eyes on every movement.”
Morgan, scanning shadows, replies, “Perimeter secure.”
Prentiss, kneeling to inspect a small white windmill placed by the grave, murmurs, “Marker in place.”
Then Garcia’s voice crackles over the radio:
“Final burner ping dropped here five minutes ago. Static, then disappeared.”
HOTCH (voice grave): “All right. Rossi, check on the family.”
Nearby, Mrs. Samsudin and Faheem sit side by side on low stools placed by the graveside. Rossi stands behind them, his presence comforting yet strong.
Footsteps approach from behind. Dr. Goh, gaunt and hollow, walks slowly toward the gravesite. He collapses to his knees before the headstone. Rossi moves closer and gently kneels beside him, intentionally being a barrier between the family and the Doctor.
ROSSI (softer than usual):
“Dr. Goh… you said something changed in Shain. Tell us.”
Goh’s voice cracks with sorrow as tears fill his eyes.
Dr. GOH (shaking, broken):
“He… he froze when I said ‘Samsudin.’ He couldn’t carry it any longer. He… broke. It’s like he became a different thing.”
Mrs. Samsudin stands and steps forward, voice trembling but firm.
Mrs. SAMSUDIN:
“He didn’t want the name, he said I didn’t help, I failed dad.I don’t deserve his name.
She lowers her gaze to the headstone as her husband’s name echoes in the cold air.
Prentiss, kneeling now as well, studies the tombstone’s surface.
PRENTISS:
"No second prints, no sign of forced tampering—looks untouched."
Nearby, Reid kneels, pulling out Shain's final poem from his coat:
REID (reading softly, voice quivering with quiet passion):
“‘They’ll remember the metaphors but forget the man.’ This—it was his indictment of how he’d be seen after… after this.”
He locks eyes with Morgan, who rests a hand on Reid’s shoulder in solidarity.
MORGAN (low):
“He is the man, kid. Even now.”
From the shadows, a soft rustle. The gate creek is barely audible. The team freezes. A hooded figure steps into the space—Shain, gaunt, wild-eyed, a serrated blade in his hand.
Prentiss positions herself between Shain and the family. She exhales slowly.
PRENTIS (quiet but steady):
“Shain…”
Her voice trembles as Shain’s gaze flickers upward.
Mrs. Samsudin leaps to her feet, tears streaming:
Mrs. Samsudin:
“Sha—don’t…”
Shain’s stare moves from his mother to the grave, then to the team. He takes a few hesitant steps forward, reaches into his pocket, and pulls out a crumpled page—his final poem. His voice cracks.
SHAIN (voice thick with pain):
“I am not missing… I am not… forgotten.One one thousand, two one thousand, three one thousand…cut”
His free hand grips the blade. In that moment, a shattered silence.
Morgan moves toward him, gun drawn but not aimed—tension coiling in his shoulders.
Morgan:
“Shain, we’ve been looking for you… let us help you. Come on, man don’t do this, you got to fight…dont…”
But Shain’s hand trembles violently. Reid steps forward, desperation in his tone.
REID (gentle, almost a comforting whisper):
“Hey Shain, listen to my voice. You’re more than those lines. You’re more than this… metaphor.”
Shain’s hand shakes, emotionless face, blank eyed. He presses the blade to his throat. Tears pool in everyone's eyes.
Time slows. Shain’s eyes flick to his mother; a single whispered word shaped by mental anguish:
SHAIN:
“I am the villain.”
With a brief, agonized sound, he runs the blade across his throat.
The Aftermath
Morgan and Prentiss react instantly—guns drop, they race forward. Rossi and Mrs. Samsudin collapse to their knees at Shain’s side. Faheem charges forward, grief pouring from his body. Hotch moves in, solemn and composed, overseeing containment.Time seems to slow down.
MORGAN (glances at Prentiss and then drops to his knees beside Shain, voice low):
“He didn’t vanish… he was made to end it. LIFE’s story.”
PRENTISS (voice shaking):
“He broke it all for us to see…”
Rossi cradles Mrs. Samsudin against his chest. Her voice is a whisper drowned in tears:
Mrs. SAMSUDIN (barely audible):
“He came back to his dad like he always wanted. The family reunion.”
Reid kneels beside Shain’s body, placing the poem upon his chest. He closes his eyes.
REID (softly):
“They’ll remember the metaphors…and the man.”
In the background, Garcia’s voice cuts through the silence:
GARCIA (radio):
“Forbidden signals are gone. No movement detected. He’s gone silent.”
Hotch stands at the boundary of the clearing, staring at Shain’s still form.
HOTCH (grave, final):
“He found his end… now we find ours.”
Dr. Goh breaks from the group, his grief uncontained—he collapses into Rossi's arms, wailing.
Rossi holds him steady. The dawn light washes over them all as the camera pulls back—shadows retreat, but the weight of loss presses in.
FADE TO BLACK
Epilogue: Aftermath & Truths
Pusara Aman Cemetery - 7:52 am
Fog lingers over the graveyard as daylight finally breaks. The aftermath is hushed. Floral tributes—papers, windmills, handwritten notes—lay scattered around Shain’s body, which now rests covered.
Emotional Unwinding
Morgan, Prentiss, Rossi, Reid, and Hotch stand in a small circle near the grave. An air of collective grief and solemnity permeates the scene. Mrs. Samsudin and Faheem sit nearby, enshrouded in a shared sorrow that transcends words.
MORGAN (softly):
“He found his final metaphor… and became his own ending.”
PRENTISS (voice breaking):
“He didn’t vanish… he only finally left himself behind.”
ROSSI (reaching out to Mrs. Samsudin):
“Your son… he was more than the story he felt trapped in.”
MRS. SAMSUDIN (whispers holding tears):
“He tried to tell us… even with his last breath.”
Closure, But Questions Remain
With Hotch's nod, Garcia appears on the tablet.
GARCIA (quietly reporting):
“All burner traces have gone cold. Goh is in custody—he’s cooperating, but insists he was only a vessel. No direct Sightings of LIFE. Digital signal patterns show someone still active—circling.”
REID (turning away from the grave, voice heavy):
“He’s not done. He’s still out there… Still writing this.”
HOTCH, (with a hint of finality):
“Then he won’t win.”
Family Farewell
Fifteen minutes later.
A small burial ceremony concludes. Mrs. Samsudin and Faheem share a tearful, final goodbye. Rossi places the handheld poem and a folded windmill on the grave.
ROSSI (softly, intimate):
“May your words—and your light—be the story people remember.”
They step back as a lone call to prayer echoes in the distance. Morgan stands beside Prentiss, both offering silent respect.
Camera pans to the windmills—first still, then stirred by a light breeze.
One Month Later
Quantico BAU Meeting Room - 12:22PM
The BAU team sits around the conference table. The mood is subdued, introspective. A single red mug steams beside Garcia’s laptop.
GARCIA (summarizing records):
“Dr. Goh pled guilty to conspiracy to abduct and psychological coercion. LIFE’s blog tags still pinging— IPs rotating through Southeast Asia. He’s gone underground.”
REID,(placing the final poem in a binder):
“They archived his last words. Historians—and families—will remember the metaphors and the man.”
MORGAN (looking up):
“This ends with Shain, not with us. We carry his story—not ours.”
PRENTISS (quiet determination):
“We’ll keep at LIFE. He weaponized faith and grief. He won’t be allowed a grave here.”
HOTCH(standing, voice firm):
“We unmasked the architect. Now we find the master. And we finish this.”
The team shares a moment—grief, resolve, solidarity.
Legacy of Light
Shain’s Substack homepage, logged and active.
The header reads “Molting: A Profile in Echoes." Below, a poem appears—on repeat among commenters:
“They’ll remember the metaphors… but they’ll also remember the man.”
The camera lingers on that final line as the screen fades to black.
BAU Bullpen
QUANTICO, VIRGINIA – 11:22 PM
Somewhere between dusk and full dark. The Screen casts a heatmap—glowing nodes on mosques, churches, elder-care centers.
GARCIA (pointing toward map)
LIFE’s pings rotate around sanctuaries—mosques, churches, even elder-care centers. His code hides in prayer schedules, anonymous donation logs. He’s using faith to mask faithlessness.
HOTCH (cold, deliberate)
He’s not just hiding. He’s taunting the idea of salvation itself.
REID (leaning forward, excited):
Symbolic. His patterns suggest he sees these places as both altar and battlefield. We need psycholinguists on his Substack posts—there are embedded cues, ritual breadcrumbs.
PRENTISS (softly):
What about digital profiles? Anyone else echoing Shain or Dr. Goh?
GARCIA (solemn):
Three flagged IPs with overlapping spiritual‑trauma markers—same burner‑encryption behaviors. LIFE is building a network.
SIDE CORRIDOR – MOMENTS LATER
ROSSI stands beside FAHEEM who flew to Virginia, in solidarity for his brother.
ROSSI (fatherly);
”Your brother’s faith—it wasn’t weakness. It grounded him. Someone twisted it, but what he believed in was always love.”
FAHEEM (quiet, tense)
”He… hell, we believed that God gave him a heart big enough to carry others. We never thought someone could use that against him.”
ROSSI (soft, fierce)
“That’s not on him—it’s on the ones who mistook God for control”
THE COST OF LIGHT:
Quantico BAU Meeting Room – 3:43 PM
The walls once covered in threads and photos are now bare. A large evidence board sits half-empty. The mood is heavy.
PRENTISS sits at a table, scanning a typed field report. Her brow is tense, jaw tight.
GARCIA types silently behind her monitor. A soft digital chime echoes. She ignores it.
REID sits alone near the back wall, headphones on. He listens again to the recovered audio.
SHAIN'S VOICE (V.O., DISTORTED, GHOSTLY)
”They’ll remember the metaphors... but forget the man.”
REID closes his eyes. The words settle over him.
HOTCH (softly, from across the room)
”They won’t forget him. We won’t.”
MORGAN enters carrying two coffee cups. He walks over to FAHEEM, who stares at the mural on Garcia’s screen.
MORGAN:
”Still warm.”
FAHEEM (accepting the cup, distant):
”He didn’t want to disappear. He just... didn’t know how to stay.”
ROSSI walks in holding a thin manila folder marked in black: LIFE – PROFILE INCOMPLETE. He sets it down.
ROSSI:
”This wasn’t just about Shain. Or Goh. It’s a blueprint. A dry run. There will be others.”
GARCIA: (without turning)
”New posts from the LIFE handle are already up. It’s doctrine now. Not a manifesto. A faith... built from fracture.”
REID (quietly, half to himself):
”He doesn’t kill for pain. He kills for meaning. Rewrites loss into loyalty.”
HOTCH (stepping forward)
”Then we stay ready. We find him. We stop him.”
A moment of collective stillness.
PUSARA AMAN CEMETERY- 6.33 PM
A temporary marker rests beside a well-tended grave. Atop it: a folded paper crane.
Close on the plaque—no name. Just black ink handwritten:
“MY WOUNDS ARE ALPHABETS. MY SCARS—A ROADMAP.”
MRS. SAMSUDIN stands over the marker. Her fingers touch the edge of the crane.
FAHEEM watches from a distance, hands in pockets, still.
No tears now. Just wind and the sound of dusk.
QUANTICO – BRIEFING ROOM (FLASH-FORWARD MONTAGE)
REID, (in video log mode, speaks into a camera—eyes tired, voice resolute.)
REID:
”LIFE is a master of abstraction. He doesn’t kill directly—he orchestrates the loss of self. He infects ideologies…and then steps back.”
Cut to:
HOTCH,(striding through the bullpen.)
HOTCH:
”Now we know his pattern. And once someone is obsessed with mythology…they leave a trail.”
Cut to:
MORGAN, closing a file labeled PROJECT: LIFE, looks up.
“He wants to be immortal? Then we bring him out of the shadows.”
QUANTICO AUDIO ROOM – 8:52PM
REID :
”The wound is the place where the light enters you.”
– Rumi
FADE TO BLACK.
Author’s Note
I was supposed to post this yesterday.
But something in me said: don’t just upload it. Finish it. Properly.
Not as a fanfic. Not as a placeholder. But as a real episode—for the people who grew up watching Criminal Minds, for those of us who were never found the way we should’ve been.
So here it is.
What started as a procedural grief experiment became a full episode. Not just imagined—but structured, scripted, and layered like it was being written for the show. Every scene. Every voice. Every metaphor.
For those who asked me to drop it—thank you for your patience.
Let’s get to it.
Wheels up.
-Shain
Stay tuned: the next chapter in the Rust and Silence series drops today at 6 PM SINGAPORE TIME.
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