This is fierce and uncompromising, in a way that feels very deliberate. You don’t let the reader hide behind aesthetics or good intentions, and that tension gives the piece real weight. Even when it’s uncomfortable, it feels honest. This isn’t a poem about hope; it’s about responsibility. Strong work.
Nice one!
damn just @ me next time
This is fierce and uncompromising, in a way that feels very deliberate. You don’t let the reader hide behind aesthetics or good intentions, and that tension gives the piece real weight. Even when it’s uncomfortable, it feels honest. This isn’t a poem about hope; it’s about responsibility. Strong work.
Thanks, I really appreciate it. I had this one written months ago. -Shain